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1 year before   B. O. G

“This is just going to be awesome.” said Rang, sarcastically. The squad of 4 young commandos, each aged 7 but appearing to be 14, appeared at the live-rounds training grounds. This was their first time with live rounds. They were told by the older commando squads that many have lost their brothers during this training.
“No it’s shabla not!” said  Ari, clearly not amused.” I really need to get my hair cut” said Gett, busy messing with his black ,spiky hair . “One of us is most likely about to die and all you can think about is hair?!” Ari snapped, clearly getting on edge.” Someone’s not in a good mood today.And NoNE of us will die. I am sure of it!”   Ca said under his breath. Ca usually did not talk much.  A long legged, skinny necked kaminoan walked up to the boys slowly and said gracefully, “You may begin.” “Joy!” said Gett and eyed the kaminoan.
It left and all of a sudden the giant Kaminoan dome was filled with blaster fire. “Over Here!” Ari screamed, his voice barely auditable over the blaster fire. He pointed towards a large toppled wall on the other side of the dome. The wall was probably left there from other squads. The small squad ran for their lives toward the wall, then Rang fell, because he got a blaster bolt straight through his ankle. Rang screamed, And Ca looked back at his injured brother, who was lying on the ground, shaking with tears of pain running down his cheeks. “Rang!” Ca yelled, Running to help his fallen brother. Ari and Gett were already at the toppled wall when they noticed two brothers hadn’t made it. “ Fierfeck! Im going to go help them!” Gett yelled to Ari and almost took off to help when Ari grabbed his arm and said,” Don’t! We cannot afford to lose another brother!” Gett looked confused and yelled, “What are you talking about? We haven’t lost anyone and we haven’t lost Ca and Rang!”
Ari looked at Gett then at the ground.” Somebody wake me from this nightmare, I can’t control myself.” Ari thought and let go of Gett. Gett ran to help Rang and Ca. And then Ari ran with him, “How could I have ever said that?” Ari thought. They arrived at Rang and Rang screamed again. “Stop screaming! Get up and get your arm over my shoulder!” yelled Ca. “Look out!” Gett yelled diving and knocking over the rest of his squad. A huge blaster launched them all into the air. Gett landed on the ground and something landed on him and then everything went black and he could hear his squad members screaming his name. He couldn’t get up.

The Next Day

“ Gett… wake up Gett” Gett opened his eyes and everything was blurred but then he focused and Ca, Ari and Rang were all leaning over him in the sleeping quarters. Rang had a strange machine attached to him to help him walk. “ Since when are you a cyborg?” Gett said hoarsely and laughed. “ Good thing you’re name is Gett! It suits you!” said Rang. “ Never mind Rang,Gett, are you okay?” Ca said, shoving rang out of the way. “Yea I’m ok. What happened? Did everyone make it?”  Ari looked at Gett ,, his eyes were different and more solemn then before the live rounds training. “ Yes everyone made it, and You got knocked out shoving us out of the way when a cannon round was coming to us.It takes skill to do that.Then we dragged you behind the wall and waited until it was over” Ari said and smiled, but his brown eyes were still solemn.
“Well ya better get up! Were gonna miss the food!” Rang said, Crutching really fast on the robotic crutches towards the door. Gett jumped out of bed then ran and caught up with Rang at the door. “Apparently he can walk!” said Ca, catching up to them.” Race you guys to the mess!” said Gett. “You’re gonna lose!” said Ari racing past Rang, almost him down.” Hey! Not fair” yelled Rang steadying himself. “Meet you there!” said Ca running down the hallway. Gett was in the lead and Ari was about pass him when Gett ran around a corner and stopped. Then Ari and Ca bumped into him and Rang slowly came behind them. “What’s the Hold up?” said Rang, panting. “I think you units need to be reconditioned.” said a tall kaminoan. Gett’s eyes got huge, and Rang almost fell over. Every clone knew what reconditioning meant. An older commando named Darman said when you were sent, you either came back crazy or messed up, or never coming back at all. It was utter silence for almost a minute when all of a sudden the kaminoan lifted up into the air then hit a wall and toppled over. “ Fierfeck” whispered ari. “What happened?” ca whispered. “I think I did it, but I don’t know how…” said Gett. “You did that?”  asked rang. “ I think so, all I did was lift my hand and then I thought about that kaminoan falling over then it did.” said Gett, smiling. “It was so cool!”  He turned aroung and looked the the others, their eyes wide and Ari’s jaw dropped. “ Umm…come on guys lets get to the mess so we can figure this out.” Said ari.
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This is my first FanFic about teenage clone Commandos..hope you like it..please comment
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:iconfi8015:
errmmm force using commando? kickass!
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:iconetaindarmangirl:
hahah awww yeaahhh!
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:iconfi8015:
no. FUUUUUUCCCKKKKKK YEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAA!
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:iconfi8015:
you changed your icon! oh i forgot....season nine of red vs blue is this summer! WOOT!WOOT! LOL... any way...HEEELLLLL YEEEAA!!
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:iconanakin-wan:
is there more?
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:iconetaindarmangirl:
i dont think i will make any moar..i kind of gave up a while ago..
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